Epic
Gotta agree with the previous review here, you'd be perfect for all kinds of roles.
You might wanna do yourself a favour and post these as voice acting rather then informational, dunno if it actually helps but it makes sense.
Ah and figure out where the static in your recording is coming from and obliterate it, cus i'd kinda want to sample this for some obnoxious industrial tekno to be honest :D
Thanks alot,under the voice acting options there were multiple and it was leaning between this and comedy so i acted on impulse, the static is prob my cheap mic or software used audacity on ubuntu otherwise i would have done it through acid.
Sweet
Hate to break it to you but i'm going to be absolutely no help on this.
Frankly i can't find any fault with this as is and i rather like it.
Keep going at it is the best advice i can offer :3
Haha, thanks!
Kick ass
I don't normally care for remixes much, give or take artists doing their own vip versions but you managed to turn this from liquid to full on.
Sweet, now it kinda sounds like something i'd hear on bassjunkees during a saturday night :3
Thanks! I agree with the fact that remixes don't deserve high scores usually, and I appreciate your review and the favorite :D
Really good
Sounds like the stuff they play on the radio 24/7 here.
Could do with some vocals if plan to make a shorter edit, but this one's pretty flawless imo
Keep it up :3
Wow, thank you for the coment. :)
But I don't have any vocals and I never worked with vocals neither. :(
Thanks for listening and commenting.
It's ok
I rather like how it's vinyl length, but keep in mind most of your audience here has ADD in varying degrees of severity, so it's unlikely many will sit through anything over 3 minutes long unless they really like it, nevermind 10 minutes plus.
That aside i listened to your first upload aswell and i think two things would really help you, firstly record/compose your pieces in a slightly higher volume cus your current level is hard to hear :3
Secondly do yourself a tremendous favour and try to copy something you like, not so much literally but try to get close to the sound of whatever you like listening to, you'll learn to improve faster then just jamming away on your own.
All that said, i think you're off to a great start, keep at it and have fun
thx :) hardstyle baby xD!
Sweet
I'd keep this as a template, but i'm taking the liberty of assuming you want to expand this into a full track and i could be wrong about that :3
If so i'd suggest breaking down to a melodic segment right at the 0:55 mark where you currently have a switch of riff. Not so much reintroducing the synth but a slower segment which you could use as a chorus part, then pick it back up.
You could use that a second or third time, depending on how long you'd like the latter part you currently have to be but perhaps twice with some kind of plateau prior to the end where you allow yourself room to add some ambient bells and whistles.
As is, i'd say it's a bit more proto Slayer then Megadeth but i mainly listened to youthanasia by them anyway so x3
Overall good stuff, keep it at it!
Your assumption is absolutely correct, I do want to turn this into a full track and put some vocals into the track too.
Ive already begun working more on the synth segment and experimenting it with the track, originally leaving it as an intro and ending to the track BUT I will see if it works with the chorus or not.
Cheers for the feedback! BB
Sweet :3
You sound a fair bit like him, track reminds me of his remix of "i wanna be a hippy" by Technohead.
Nice touch adding some chip sounds in there too :3
Bang up job.
Awesome man thanks! Yeah that's a good one, that guy rules Frenchcore man, seriously.
A kick/bass drum perhaps?
Cus they sound like a snaredrum only breakbeat atm.
If this is the intro, i'd go all in and finish it cus what you have so far is pretty epic retro sounding. Ok, so it's just an arp and a string but sometimes less is more so i won't fault it lol :3
Way to go
Well see, there is a kick drum in there, i guess it's just quieter than i had hoped. I do plan on finishing this but I just can't get past how i feel something is missing.
Thanks for the awesome review!
Futuristic
Platform shoot 'em up with an armoured character.
Nice piece, loops well, doesn't get old fast.
Good job
Awesome! I'm very glad to hear it.
Good stuff
Really sweet guitar work right there, does your offer to collab still stand? If so pick a track, any track and do with it whatever you like.
I can't seem to persuade anyone here to lend me their voice so why not an epic guitarist instead?
Disregarding that, keep up the good work and ponder the notion of getting yourself a band, you sound like you'd enjoy it :3
Thanks! =)
I actually play with various "bandish type things" but nothing very serious.
And for sure, I'll check out your work and see what I can work with!
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